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@@ -798,9 +798,9 @@ battlefield.[^174] Decapitation of prisoners of war certainly was a
 later practice in Egypt, as attested in iconography such as the Narmer
 palette from the very beginning of the First Dynasty (Figure 9). 
 
-![](../static/images/hafsaas/Fig9.jpg "")
+![Detail of decapitated corpses on the obverse face of the Narmer palette (Egyptian Museum, Cairo JE 32169). Drawing by Henriette Hafsaas.](../static/images/hafsaas/Fig9.jpg "Detail of decapitated corpses on the obverse face of the Narmer palette (Egyptian Museum, Cairo JE 32169). Drawing by Henriette Hafsaas.")
 
-**~~Figure 9: ~~**
+**~~Figure 9: Detail of decapitated corpses on the obverse face of the Narmer palette (Egyptian Museum, Cairo JE 32169). Drawing by Henriette Hafsaas.~~**
 
 The
 head could also have been removed after some time of exposure on the

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@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ South Sudan, Sudan\'s economy lost its main driving force and primary
 income. In addition, US sanctions, corruption, and government
 inefficiency limited any changes that would improve citizens\' lives.
 The economic crisis aggravates the additional costs of fighting the
-insurgents on the city streets and the continuous strengthening of the
+insurgents in the city streets and the continuous strengthening of the
 security sector.[^8] All this resulted in currency depreciation and
 hyperinflation.
 
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@ Hassan 'Al Boushi' Alim, accused Nafi' Ali Nafi, the Former Assistant to
 the President, of corruption and human rights violations.[^9] Enas
 Satir, the Sudanese artist, refers to this event in her work explaining
 the causes of the 2018 revolution. On her Instagram profile, she writes:
-"(...) Al Boushi, when facing Nafi' Ali Nafi' (...), asked him: "*Tell
-me about the bread, that is now the size of an ear*". Every word uttered
+"(...) Al Boushi, when facing Nafi' Ali Nafi' (...), asked him: *Tell
+me about the bread, that is now the size of an ear*." Every word uttered
 by Al Boushi is as powerful today as it was years earlier.[^10] The
 reduction in the size of the bread referred to by Enas Satir was
 associated with the reduction in government subsidies on basic goods,
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ should be sought in the Sudanese economy's long-term deterioration. Many
 years of Islamist military regime activities have allocated more funds
 to the security apparatus than to economic development strategies. The
 corrupt system hit all citizens and significantly increased living
-costs, such as costs of food and gas. Deteriorating living conditions
+costs, such as food and gas. Deteriorating living conditions
 spurred the development of a strong and conscious civil society.
 Professionals began forming trade unions to mobilize action for better
 pay and working conditions. The protesters demanded to overthrow the
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ uprisings of 1964 and 1985, where trade unions played a leading role,
 the uprisings in 2013, and especially that of 2018, were driven by
 masses of young people and activists organizing protests and providing
 up-to-date information. As far as the uprising of 2019 is concerned, the
-protest had a unique character because they were a combination of
+protests had a unique character because they were a combination of
 efforts by professional and social groups -- those that were first
 mobilized in 2013, community-based structures and initiatives training
 from the beginning in non-violent civil engagement. The Sudanese